5 Sure-fire ways to write damn sparkling short sentences

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5 Sure-fire ways to write damn sparkling short sentences

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Correct sentence structure

Have you ever thought of perking up your writing style?  Yes, I am talking about you. Do you use short sentences?

I know you are a good writer, but can you strive to get better than that?




According to studies conducted in 2017, your website content determines the traffic you are going to have on your site. It persuades your readers to take action and contact you.


You don’t have to be an average writer forever. Experiencing a slow growth in your writing career can lead to death.


Death?  Yes, death in your site, morale, self-esteem and finally you might quit.


Soon people are going to get bored of your content. Nobody would want to read your work.


By learning how to write damn sparkling short  sentences, you are going to become that much coveted super-duper writer.


How can you write sparkling sentences?


Your sentences should have emotions, images, and logic.


How can you write a sparkling sentence?


  • Use short sentences


Did you know that short sentences have less grammatical errors? They improve readability and make your content lively. Read more about sentence structure.


  • Get rid of unnecessary words


Can you imagine that moment when you are reading and realize the content has unneeded words?

It sucks!

Get rid of terms such as that, very, just, really, definitely, probably and many others if the sentence makes a meaning without them.


  • Evoke emotion


Sentences with emotions attract many readers. What is the general mood of your audience? What problems are they trying to solve?


It might be unemployment, trying to cope with death, divorce, etc. Slot in that emotion in your sentence.


  • Write conversationally


When writing, you are talking to your readers. Put your focus on your audience and address them as if you were doing it face to face.



  1. Most women get confused when they start adding weight.
  2. Have you ever felt confused when you started adding weight?


Example 1 sounds too general. Example 2 sounds specific because it addresses you. Readers love conversational tone and are likely to comment to that blog.


  • Paint a picture


How can you create an image in your sentence? Giving the reader a clear picture of your mind depends on your words.


It is possible to do that through entertaining your audience. Combine abstract and concrete images. Abstract is that which you can imagine/image in your mind. Concrete is something you can see.

Image in your sentence

Do you attach images in your write-up?


You can also create abstract and concrete language.

The best way to combine abstract with concrete language in an article is through connecting your facts with data.



For example:

“Alice is a talented author but she hates one thing about herself. Whenever she sits down to write, she finds herself staring at the screen or browsing through the social media.”


According to an American journal released on 7th July 2011, 40% of authors have talent in writing but aren’t motivated to do it. The Journal further states that most writers can’t accomplish their goals because they are lazy.


  • Add facts in your sentences


Currently, there is too much information in the internet. If you say a fact, you need to prove it. Otherwise your readers might underrate you.


Remember the online world is full of annoying sales pitch and advertisements. How can your audience know that you are different from them?


You can do this by showing your readers what you say. Don’t mention a statement without proof. That’s all!


  • Practice


Hidden treasures have to be searched. Likewise writing well needs practice.

The more you write, the more you learn. Think about a baby boy learning how to walk. At first, he tries and falls down.

Next he moves two steps and stands. He then runs without falling. Who knows, later he might be a famous athlete.

The same applies to writing. It might seem daunting at first. Don’t give up. Write, write, and write.


Are you going to change your perception?  What is your choice? Take action today!


What  else should we do to write sparkling sentences? Feel free to comment below.

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About Author

Dorine Otinga

Dorine Otinga

I am a passionate freelance writer, blogger, Swahili teacher and research assistant. It is my pleasure to bring hope to all upcoming freelancers and online entrepreneurs. My goal is to help you become the golden writer who can shake the world through words. Feel free to go through the content in this blog and unveil the great talent in you.



June 17, 2017 at 9:46 pm

Thanks for reminding me to add my references. It’s something I need to remember. Thanks for the tips. I enjoyed this article.

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    June 18, 2017 at 4:51 am

    Hi Joyce,

    I am glad that you remembered. References add value to your readers.


June 18, 2017 at 4:59 am

Wow. Quite an informing piece there. This piece will come in handy in fine tuning my writing. Will be looking forward to more informative articles from you.

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    June 18, 2017 at 7:07 am

    Hi Keyah,

    I am happy to be part of your success in writing. Feel free to check in for new posts soon.

Victor Korie

June 18, 2017 at 9:57 am

Hey Dorine, thanks for letting down another great post.

I seem to have a thing with shorter simple and clear sentences. It gets hooked up almost immediately, and before I know it, am heading over to another post on the same blog.

As a writer, it is crucial that you relate with your audience, and you really make a powerful point there on emotions. Am glad I walked away with great tips from here.

Thanks again

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    June 18, 2017 at 11:23 am

    Hi Victor,

    I am happy that you found something to pick up from this post.Yes, emotions show empathy to your audience. Add them in your posts and you will get better results.

    Thank you


June 18, 2017 at 10:16 am

Lovely work here…..keep it up

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    June 18, 2017 at 11:24 am

    Hi Elishama,

    Thank you for the compliment. I will keep the fire burning.


June 18, 2017 at 1:14 pm

Dorine, this is really good. Keep it up.

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    June 18, 2017 at 3:49 pm

    Hello Nancy,

    I am delighted to hear from you.

    Many thanks.

Vidolo Vidanyi

June 22, 2017 at 8:39 pm

I like the great work you are doing my dear keep the fire burning.
I am glad for learning something new from the artist…

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    June 26, 2017 at 3:12 pm

    Thanks Mr Vidolo.
    It is my pleasure to share.

Vidolo Vidanyi

June 22, 2017 at 8:40 pm

The work is adorable keep it up


June 27, 2017 at 6:41 pm

Thank you for sharing these great tips! As a non-native English speaker I struggle the most with writing and your post is just in time for me 😉 I’ll keep practicing!

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    June 28, 2017 at 6:49 pm

    Hi Sofia,

    I am glad you found it helpful. It doesn’t matter whether you are a native or not. Many ESL writers are doing well after mastering their sentence structure. I believe you will be a guru soon.


June 28, 2017 at 2:12 am

Such great tips! I’ve been working on my writing and these will definitely help! Xo jen http://abeautifulinspiration.com

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    June 28, 2017 at 6:45 pm

    Hi Jen,
    Thank you for reading the tips. I am happy to help.Welcome again!

Nicola @ Happy Healthy Motivated

June 28, 2017 at 7:11 am

I know I struggle writing awesome short sentences, so I’m going to really study this the next time I’ve got a writing project! Love the notion of getting rid of unnecessary words. So easy and effective!

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    June 28, 2017 at 6:44 pm

    Thank you Nicola,

    It is my pleasure to help out. Feel free to go through the posts.


July 5, 2017 at 7:21 pm

Hi Dorine,
I just found your blog today. While reading through the comments, I noticed that some commenters’ icons show your image. You need to do something about it. Otherwise good work.

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    July 6, 2017 at 7:59 am

    Hi Kevine,

    Thank you for alerting me. I can see that. I will do something about it.

Jeremy Kireru

July 6, 2017 at 9:31 pm

Clear, concise and informative. I am really learning a lot from your blog posts. Thanks and keep (teaching us teacher) up the good work!

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    July 7, 2017 at 8:13 am


    I will keep the fire burning.


July 10, 2017 at 1:34 pm

You have a good style how to write your blogs, I love them thank you. And so far, good information very useful, cheers Dieter

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    July 10, 2017 at 1:51 pm

    Thank you Dieter,


Elise Cohen Ho

July 10, 2017 at 10:48 pm

Great points . I like to imagine my reader across the table from me.

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    July 11, 2017 at 4:41 am

    Hi Elise,

    Thank you for the nice compliment. Wow! It’s great to imagine our readers across the table.


July 14, 2017 at 5:20 pm

Why write one sentence where three would do? Ha!

    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    July 22, 2017 at 4:54 am

    Hi Lorna,

    The point I am trying to bring is writing short sentences to avoid unnecessary words. I mean writing one sentence could be better if it is talking about a certain point on its own.

    Besides that, you can write three sentences or two depending on your preference. What matters is to have a readable blog at the end. Short sentences are appealing and entice readers.

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    Dorine Otinga

    Dorine Otinga

    September 7, 2017 at 7:18 pm

    Thanks Conor for your kind words. You are welcomed to read more posts anytime.

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